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I have 1,000 words that I would like to say to you.
And if they're not perfect,I'll perfect them till your thoughts aren't torn.
I'd walk 1,000 miles to get to you.
Any doubts,I'll reject them and keep walking till my soles are worn.
I know I may seem foolish.
Maybe a little naive.
But with you I want to do this.
You make me believe.
That we can get through this.
All these reservations.
Fade away after awhile.
Long distance conversations.
Get me by until I get to see your smile.
Hold you in my arms.
I'll never let go.
Protect you from all harm.
So many feelings I've been scared to show.
Despite all my charms.
It was so hard to let you know.
You're the girl.
That I wanna be with at the end of the day.
Took my world.
And made it feel ok.
When night covers the sky.
My thoughts race.
In my dreams.
I see your face.
I just want you.
And I just want to.
Hold you in my arms.
I'll never let go.
Protect you from all harm.
So many feelings I've been scared to show.
Despite all my charms.
It was so hard to let you know.
Yet it was so easy to choose you.
I can't believe I never realized.
That I'm not willing to lose you.
Waking up to the brown of your eyes.
Is something I'll get used to.
Seeing your face.
I am so excited.
My heart starts to race.
My passion's re-ignited.
And I can't wait.
A feeling so strong that I can't fight it.
Not like I wanted to.
Cause in my heart.
All I wanted was you.
I wont let us fall apart.
This feeling is so new.
Can't believe I didn't see this from the start.
Now all I want to do...is.
Hold you in my arms.
I'll never let go.
Protect you from all harm.
So many feelings I've been scared to show.
Despite all my charms.
It was so hard to let you know.
Now I don't wanna let you go.
I'll hold you forever.
I won't let go.
Protect you from whatever.
It was so hard to let you know.
Because you already knew.
I love you.
©2006-2009 ~DeniedRedemption
:icondeniedredemption:

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Another poem for someone very special to me.

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:iconelegantmistress:
awww...its soooo cute!!! i feel that way about someone too...but eh...i still have like...lingering suspicions >.> but anyways, love the way you repeated "hold you in my arms"
:icondeniedredemption:
Thank you lots.

--
"Eyes that carry no life.
Carry memories not worth remembering.
It's hard to fall on your face.
When you weren't standing in the first place.
And everything I say or do.
Is just a matter of not mattering to you"
:icontime-to-dance:
Ooo its so lovely :D your sucha good poem writer, shes lucky to have you ;]

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Teach me heartache Stop this burning now.
:icondeniedredemption:
Awww,thank you.

--
"Eyes that carry no life.
Carry memories not worth remembering.
It's hard to fall on your face.
When you weren't standing in the first place.
And everything I say or do.
Is just a matter of not mattering to you"
:iconornami:
can i say once again..... your awsome.....

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Like Play-doh, no matter what shapes you mold me into, no matter how impressively magnificent, I usually end up crushed....
:icondeniedredemption:
Thanx.

--
"Eyes that carry no life.
Carry memories not worth remembering.
It's hard to fall on your face.
When you weren't standing in the first place.
And everything I say or do.
Is just a matter of not mattering to you"
:icondragon-blade14:
Lover... this is really sweet, at least, I think its for me.. if it isn't then sorry >.<
:icondeniedredemption:
Yeah,It's the one that was for you.The second one.

--
"Eyes that carry no life.
Carry memories not worth remembering.
It's hard to fall on your face.
When you weren't standing in the first place.
And everything I say or do.
Is just a matter of not mattering to you"

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